How far do you agree with this statement?
第一段：背景 题目改写 观点 ( 有一定坏处，但不至于直接限制）
第二段：论点 论据（1：日常生活需要计算机 2：学术也离不开）
第三段：论点 论据（ 从学术造假，信息杂乱罗列了消极影响）
第四段：总结 回应观点
高分词汇
Beneficial: 有利的 restrict: 限制 educational tool：教育工具
Essential：核心的 independent search skills: 独立研究技能
论证段的写作模式：论点 论据（最好是两个论点，例子其实可有可无）
但对于只想拿6-6.5的学生 论点 说理 例子的模式也行，因为比较简单
第一段：背景 题目改写 观点 ( 有一定坏处，但不至于直接限制）
Nowadays, the Internet is used widely in education around the world.（背景） Some people say it is beneficial for teaching and learning because there is so much information available. However, others claim that the Internet is bad for students' research skills and believe that its use should be restricted. （题目改写） I believe that use of the Internet should be limited in some ways, but it is still a valuable educational tool.（发表个人观点）
第二段：论点 论据（1：日常生活需要计算机 2：学术也离不开）
Firstly, the Internet is essential for many people today （论点，表明网络对当代人很重要）. It is widely used in the workplace and people's everyday lives, both for finding information, for personal finance, for keeping in touch with friends and family, for social networking and so on. Therefore, school students should learn how to use it correctly.（论据一，从现实生活中的各种场景说明网络的重要性，很多学生会漏掉后面therefore这句话，这个其实很要不得，上课时候也经常强调一定要给结论）In addition, students also need it for research in school and university subjects. Nowadays the most up-to-date information can be found on the Internet, rather than in books which can become out of date very quickly. Using the Internet is a convenient way of finding out information and developing independent research skills. （论据二，从学术研究的层面上讲清楚为何孩子们要学习电脑）
第三段：论点 论据（ 从学术造假，信息杂乱罗列了消极影响）
However, the Internet has some negative aspects （论点，表明电脑也存在弊端）. For example, not all websites are reliable or contain accurate information. Students need to learn how to evaluate and check the material they find on the Internet （论据一，表明孩子们本身因素，无知，分辨不了真假）. Also, many students simply copy large amounts of material, such as essays from the Internet. Some students then pretend that this material is their own work, which is illegal. If students simply copy information or material from the Internet without understanding or analysing it, they will not learn it fully （论据二，交代清楚网络对学生们学术的影响）. Teachers need to teach students how to research and use information from the Internet properly （结论，结合第一段所讲的，有一些坏处，但是合理引导还是对学生很有利）.
第四段：总结 回应观点
In conclusion, schools and universities should teach students how to use the Internet by teaching them good research skills （明确观点，不应该禁止使用网络电脑等）. If students know how to use the Internet effectively, they are likely to become better students and have better employment opportunities in the future （总结第二段所提到的好处）. (314 words)
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雅思大作文范文：电脑比人类更智能会有哪些利弊影响
6.5分：智能计算机的好处1：智能计算机能够解放人力，在各个行业工作。
智能计算机的好处2：智能计算机能够提高效率。
智能计算机的坏处1：人工智能机器的广泛应用会降低就业率，导致贫富差距加大。
智能计算机的坏处2：人类对机器会更加依赖，失去基本的生存技能或者生活经验。
智能计算机的坏处3：智能机器人会带来道德问题。
Computer technology is advancing dramatically since its invention and has shown some possibility of intelligence, which means (that) they are capable to think, and therefore make judgment and initiate action in complex situation, featuring like human brains. This excites many people while arousing some concern about its hidden hazard to human being. (定语从句，宾语从句，非谓语，)
Of course those optimists have their own reasons. The first one is that intelligent computers would free human labor to an enormous extent. They would replace human workers in many walks of life, performing many tasks in medical procedure, manufacture, domestic service, space and ocean exploration and so on. They can work more efficiently, accurately than human counterparts and they never feel tired or fear any danger. It is claimed that these advantages would increase the productivity of the whole world for long run and bring human comfort and convenience. (表语从句，非谓语，比较句型，并列句，形式主语)
However it also makes sense to worry about the potential risk that computational intelligence may impose on human race. It is generally believed that employment rate would decline if artificial intelligent machines are widely applied to substitute for human labors. Correspondingly, the wealth gap can be inferred wider. In addition to economic impact, human community may increase dependence on smart technology, losing some basic living skills or life experience. Some pessimists show their concern about ethical issue in literature involving robots which are likely to manipulate humans. Nonetheless, many people hold the belief that no matter how intelligent a computer is, it is programed by human being and is under human’s control for sure. (形式主语，被动句，定语从句，条件状语从句，非谓语，同位语从句，让步状语从句)
Based on the discussion above, I personally think that whether advanced technology can benefit human race or not is determined by how we human utilize it. Technology is supposed to be neutral and has no threat on human designers. If we put it to good use, then we would make the most of technology. (非谓语，宾语从句，主语从句，被动句，条件状语从句)
计算机专业的前景怎么样，为何都说计算机专业吃香？
计算机专业一直是全国各地各大高等院校的热门行业,飞速发展.随着着互联网发展,计算机专业人才的紧缺状况可能越来越严重.在中国,IC人才、nas存储人才、国际贸易人才、网络信息安全人才、手机游戏技术性人才比较严重紧缺;在手机软件人才结构分析上,水准高的系统分析员和有领域环境的新项目策划师过少,与此同时手机软件白领也非常欠缺。
计算机专业发展前景，在我国做电子计算机运行的专业技术人员不上100数万人,随着产业结构的调节,科技强国发展战略的进一步执行,科学合理、工业生产、国防安全和教学事业发展必须一大批高质量的电子计算机专业人才。
要想有一个好的电脑岗位,最先得有切实的技术性做为基本;次之,要常常掌握电子计算机领域的最新消息,学习培训全新的技术性;再度,社会经验不可或缺,在学校期内根据各种方式累积了社会经验,如暑假有目的性的打工赚钱,或根据亲戚朋友关联累积社会经验,也会有针对性地报名参加实习学习培训,院校布置的实践这些。最终,掌握电子计算机行业有哪些岗位,及其这种岗位需要什么技术性,有目的性地搞好学生就业提前准备。
在全部技术专业里，电子计算机算得上被要求率较高的，被绝大多数领域必须。业务流程企业必须系统软件，必须程序流程，电子计算机企业要程序猿。实体行业必须app或是微信小程序。只需就是你能想起的领域，如今都跟互联网挂勾，不跟互联网挂勾的领域也无法生存。可是，并并不一定的计算机专业学员都能寻找称心的工作中。由于互联网技术类的作业基本上都需要高，规定技术专业水准，实际操作水准。水平差的人作出的程序流程不能用，消耗的不仅仅是时间也有钱财和企业的资源。
电子计算机科学与技术技术专业是非常传统的的计算机专业，该技术专业较为重视知识体系的整体性，因此大学毕业生的学生就业面也非常广，既可以从业软件研发职位，还可以从业硬件配置有关的产品研发岗。此外，如果有读研究生的方案，可以关键考虑一下电子计算机科学与技术技术专业。
大数据专业和人工智能专业是较为新的技术专业，现阶段很多的高等院校都设立了大数据专业，一部分整合资源工作能力非常强的学校还设立了人工智能专业。互联网大数据和人工智能技术是互联网经济环节的关键技术，因此选用这两个技术专业会出现比较宽阔的发展前途。因为人工智能技术方面的产品研发针对从业人员知识体系的需求非常高，因此提议人工智能专业的本科毕业生读一下硕士研究生。
最终关键说一下物联网专业，物联网专业尽管并算不上是一个新的技术专业，可是在目前5G通信网络和互联网经济的促进下，物联网专业遭受了普遍的关心（物联网专业的知识体系也有一定的调节），将来物联网技术行业将相继释放出来很多的创新性机遇，因此可以重点关注一下物联网专业。